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어느답변이 더 나은건가요?
파트6 | 2012.07.05 | 조회 419

한문제에 대해서 답변 두개를 달았는데요. 1번은 하다가 결론을 못내고 끝났고.


 


2번은 시간안에 들어오긴 했는데.. 1번 본론내용이 더 알찬거 같아서요. (서론 결론 빼고 본론만 적어요)


 


문장 만든다고 만들었는데 틀린거 있으면 많이 지적해주세요.


 


아 그리고 여러분은 파트 6 어떻게 하시나요? 저는 아래처럼 나올말들은


 


워드로 적어보면 3~5분안에 정리되는데 막상 말하려면 머릿속이 하얗게 변해요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ


 


원래 작문이랑 말하기는 상관 없는건가요? ㅠㅠㅠㅠ


 


문제


Some people prefer to work with a group of people. Other people prefer to work by themselves. Which do you prefer and why?



 


답안1


Most importantly, If work with others, I can meet many people with diverse backgroud. Therefore, I can develop my social skill.


And then, I can ask for help and advice.


So, I can learn from others.


After that, we can divide workload. So It increase productivity.


Finally, It’s more fun.


It is true working alone concentrate on work better. However I still prefer to work with others. It is more convenient.


 


답안 2 


Most importantly, If work with others, I can meet many people with diverse backgroud. Therefore, I can develop my social skill.


For example when I worked my compamy, I worked with collegues. It’s because I can meet many people.


Personally I’m someone who consider produtivity. If you work with others, you can divide workload. So It increase productivity.


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