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어려운 영어 | 2009.12.01 | 조회 139

I have recently thought about what my ideal husband would look like.

my future husband will a very good man. First of all, he will be wealthy because I think  the cost of bringing up a child is expensive.  If I haven't money, I will feel unhappy. Second, he will love family and animal , so I will want to live a dog with family. When we have free time, we will play together the game in the park. lately, he will be a responsible person because he will care for me and our family.

wealth, love and responsibility will be married life. To me, he will a great man. I will love him.

 

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