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Maelle | 2010.01.07 | 조회 217

Generally, it is thought that why peapole work hard is for buying more things or making their life more comfortable. The fact of the matter is that in past ordinary people workded to buy things in order to survive. Naturally, particular people like royal family did not only being alive but also making their life more comfortabl. In now days, there are plenty things that make human beings' life style easier than past not necessary. On the other hand a number of traditional values and customs have been lost. Does that situation concern to working hard? In my viewpoint, disappearing traditions and working hard to buy more things have few relation.


Firstly, life style of people has been changed based on industry revolution and technology. If they keep to their life of the past continually, they can not take new things which make human being more plentiful. Even though the people do not work hard, traditional values and customs will have been lost.


What is more, past life style does not fit for now days. It is well known that the world is getting close each other. We can not afford to persist our own life style. That, persisting our ownlife style, is somewhat dangerous inspiration in the present day. Accordingly, we had better take foriegn cultures and customs. Needless to say before accepting them we must make out whether what we will take makes our life more comfortable or not.


 


I wrote it by my essay. Could you please check mistakes what I made..?


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