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중돌이 | 2010.01.18 | 조회 160

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Have you ever thought about advantage of doing exercise? Exercise gives us many beneficial things. It is necessary for our health. Many people think exercise is important for their health, but they don't practice it well because of idleness. I think it is very important because it can get rid of waste of our body. It make our body stronger, and it make to prevent us from many diseases.


First, it can get rid of waste of our body. Usually, people eliminate their waste by urine. However, there are wastes that cannot be eliminated by urine. In this case, we have to exercise in order to get rid of the waste that have not been eliminated by urine.


The second reason why exercise is important is that we can make our body stronger. Exercise is very good manner which make body stronger.


Lastly, exercise can prevent us from many diseases. There are many diseases around people. We can get disease easily. To protect our body from illnesses, we have to exercise.


As a result, we can also do exercise by playing soccer, baseball or etc. If we play sports with friends, it will be more fun than doing exercise alone, and we can get many beneficial things. Therefore, we can do good things at a once. I hope people to know about the advantage of doing exercise to make their body healthy.


 

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