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Yes, I often go to restaurants outside in this neighborhood.
First of all, I don’t have much time to cook.
So, sometimes That’s what I prefer to eat eating out near my place. in nearby my neighborhood.
Secondly, I like to spend can have a gold time with my family and friends in thea at restaurants.
The restaurants around my neighborhood sometimes hold many events to give us a good time. offer many events sometimes
So, it is very good for me.
So, I prefer to visit the restaurants outside my this neighborhood.
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