I actually disagree with the statement that
the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns because of two
main reasons.
The First is that money could be a good
starter for searching for a job. It’s definitely a vital. But that’s not the
only important aspect. I think more and more people today kind of hope for work-life
balance.
The company that provides that balance is
better option for those people other than money.
Like for example, My father, when he
searching for a new job, he focused more on how the company provide health care,
how that company gives free time for them. breaks and stuff… he went to a
company that give less money, but also provide more and more healthcare benefit.
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