This is ** retuning your call. I’m calling
about the problem that you brought up during our staff meeting. As you said, a
lot of visitors who come came to our hospital have lost their personal belongings. This
month, 10 people lost their items and all of those items never turned out up at
lost and found center.
There are a lot of possibilities that visitors
might stole steal other people’s belongings, so we need to look for a way to solve
this problem.
-> 전체 답변중에서 문제점 요약부분이 너무 많은 부분을 차지합니다. 이 부분을 줄이고 솔루션에 더 시간을 할애하는 것이 좋겠습니다!
After looking into the situation, I came up
with following solution.
Why don’t we install security camera all areas
about in the hospital. I’m sure that it will be very helpful for tracking the lost
items and protect protecting -> helpful for 에 맞게 수정되어야합니다. visitor’s belongings from other people. So….
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