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Q11. 야외운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?
I think it is better to exercise in a gym
with equipment.. rather than exercising outdoor outdoors.
There are some advantage advantages for exercising in a gym with equipment.
[또는 간단하게 there are a few reasons why I think
so.]
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이 경우 중복되지도 않아서 좋습니다.
First, in a gym there are so many
kinds of exercising machine equipment in
a gym, and it is very useful and efficient to exercise,
second, in a gym exercising teacher can
teach my exercising pose. and it is very useful to reuse
my body. There are professional trainers that can help me with my
exercise. With their help, I can exercise using the right muscles, and work out
efficiently.
and you know, there are so many kinds of
exercising tips so this is why I...
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