오픽 자소서 첨삭 요청 드립니다.
My name is Hee Jung Jang but I preferred to be called Trisha.
I'm in my mid twenties.
I live in a house in Suwon with my loving family members.
These days I'm looking for a job in the field of Hotel administration.
In my free time, I go out for a jogging or walking.
i like these activities because they give me time to collect my thoughts and help me stay fit.
As for my personality, I tend to be outgoing. I have a large circle of friends.
These days the job market is very competitive and finding a job is so confusing process.
in order to get into my favorite company, english is a must.
That's the reason why I'm preparing this opic test.
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