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해변가기 관련 스크립트 첨삭 부탁드립니다.
엽 | 2018.05.13 | 조회 1327
1. 좋아하는 해변과 이유
I really enjoy going to 광안리 beach. It's one of the famous beaches in Busan. I lived there when i was young.
I go to the beach when I visit my family in Busan. It's my favorite beach because I have a lot of good memories in it and It makes me calm whenever I get there.
The landmark of 광안리 beach is 광안 big bridge. The bridge gives a great view with colorful lights in the evening.

2. 해변에 갈 때 가지고 가는 것
I really enjoy going to beaches in the every season. So I go to beaches at least once a season. Commonly, I take my freediving gears such as a mask, a snorkel, fins and a wet-suit to do freediving in the sea in the summer.
In the winter, I take a book, a camera, and a smartphone. I really like reading a book and listening musics in the cafe where is near beaches. I also take photos of landscape around beaches.

3. 해변 여행 중에 하는 일
There is a nice beach in my hometown. I spent many time of my childhood in the beach. The beach's name is 광안리. I go there whenever I visit my family in Busan. I usually go to there alone. When the weather is sunny and warm, I really like sitting and listening musics on the beach. It makes me happy. If it's raining, I usually read books while hearing the sounds of rainning in a face near the beach.

4. 캠핑 여행에서 기억에 남는 경험
My most memorable beach trip was Koh tao in Thailand last year. I went on the beach trip by myself. I was learning about freediving. And I had a plan to get the license of freediving. But, I heard that my dog might be die in a couple of days from my family. I really loved my dog. So, I had to cancel all of my plannings, and I went back home directly.
Fortunately, My dog lives yet. But she is sick. I'll never forget that beach trip because it was really so sad.

첨삭 부탁드립니다. 감사합니다.

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