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RE:공원가기 첨삭
오픽사랑꾼 | 2018.05.24 | 조회 641
공원 모습 묘사

Q. You indicated in the survey that you
like to go to the park. Describe your favorite park in as much detail as
possible. What makes it so special?

 





My favorite park is 공원이름 park which is located in front of my apartment complex.



The park is very beautiful.



There are many trees and flowers in the
park.



Also, the park has a fountain and a bicycle
path.



At the park, people walk and take a rest.



The park is popular with both children and
adults.

(잘 쓰셨어요! 더 풍부한 내용을 위해서는 My favorite part of this park is the fountain. In the fountain 

there are several fishes, so I usually feed the fishes in the park. 같이, 자연스럽게 공원 묘사를 더 추가해주면 좋습니다!)



 



공원에서 주로 하는 일



Q. Tell me about what you usually do at the
park. What is a typical day at the park like from beginning to end?





 



I often go to 공원이름
park which is near my house.



I like going to the park (there) alone. (go to the park이 너무 많이 반복되어서요..)



When I go to the park, I usually take a
walk and run in the park.



Sometimes, I ride a bicycle.



When the weather is good, I take a rest at a bench. (그냥 take a rest라고 하면 집에서 쉰다고 볼수도 있기 때문에)



I think it is a good place to enjoy my free
time.

 



공원에 가는 빈도, 사람, 하는



Q. How often do you go to the park? Who do
you usually go with? What do you like to do? Tell me in as much detail as
possible.

 





I like going to the park alone on weekdays. 

(빈도를 물어봤기 때문에, ~ five times a week, I usually go on weekdays. 라고 써주는 게 훨씬 좋답니다)



When I go to the park, I usually take a
walk and run.



Sometimes, I like to ride a bicycle for a long
time.



I also exercise to improve my physical
strength.



It is a good place to enjoy my free time.



 



공원에서 있었던 뜻밖의 경험



Q. Please tell me about a time something
interesting or unexpected happened at the park. Where and when did it occur?
What were you doing at the time?





 



I remember the time when I got lost in the
park I went to Han River



When I was an elementary school student.



The park was very crowded and wide

(For me at that time, the park felt very wide.)



I was watching a performance.



Suddenly I realized that I couldn’t see (lost) my
family.



I was very scared. Luckily, my older sister
found me.



It was a very surprising experience.

 




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