자기소개 마지막 취미 여가에 덧붙이는 내용 맥락이 어색한지 그리고 첨삭 부탁드립니다 ㅠㅠ
When i have a free time i like to go jogging and travel
i traveled around Europe last year. it was my first trip to Europe and first time to travel alone.
Sometimes i was tired and lonely but, that time was one of the most memorable experiences of my life.
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