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고구미 | 2018.09.08 | 조회 834

My name is ~

Before starting the test I have some to tell you. something

I have been wearing braces since last winter.so..when you hear my answer, you may feel that 

my pronounciation is inaccurate. I hope you understand. pronunciation

OK. I already said my name..and I'm 24 years old. I live in Seoul with my family.

My hobby these days includes cooking espacially baking(무슨 말을 하려는지 알겠지만 문법상 맞지 않는것같네요)

my hobby is somthing. these day i started ~I generally likes to make delicious food and give it to my friends.

Next, let me talk about my major.

I majored in chinese. my major is Chinese I choosed this major because learning chinese is helpful to get a job in aviation industry.

People have told me that I have a kind and delicate personality. I think my personality fits well with my future career.

Someday i hope to become a flight attendent. so I study hard to make my dream a reality. attendant


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