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5. 공연, 콘서트 보기





1) 내가 갔던 콘서트



Last
month I went to a concert by my favorite
group, MC THE MAX.



2) 콘서트가 열렸던 장소



The
concert was at a
lage
auditorium in
Sejong.



The
auditorium was not only big, but also very modern.



3) 함께 콘서트에 갔던 사람



I
went to the concert with my friends, who are fans of MC THE MAX as well.



We
had a great time.



I
really enjoyed the whole experience.



4) 공연 보러 가는 빈도



I go
to plays once or twice a year.



I
usually see them with my friends.



5) 공연 전 하는 일



I
always read reviews on the Internet before the play
.



6) 공연 후 하는 일



I
always discuss the performance with my friends after the play.



We
usually do this in a nearby coffee shop.








4. 영화보기







1) 가장 좋아하는 영화 장르




I
love action films the best.




Action
movie are very fantastic.




2) 그 장르를 좋아하는 이유




I
like them because they relieve my stress.




3) 좋아하는 영화배우 이름




I
like many actor, But I like
Natale Portman the best.




She’s
my favorite actress.




4) 배우를 좋아하는 이유




Because
She can play many different character types.




She
also has a very unique face.




She
was very beautiful in the
moive.




5) 가장 기억에 남는 영화




The
most memorable
moive I’ve
seen is Leon.




6) 영화 관람 전 하는 일




I
usually buy popcorn and
sode
before the
moive.




I
also make sure to go to the restroom before the movie.




7) 영화 관람 후 하는 일




After
the movie, I usually talk about it with my friends.








3. 동네 및 이웃







1) 내가 사는 동네




I
live in the
Sejong
city.




My
home is very close to
Chochiwon
Station.




2) 동네에 있는 시설




There
are many apartment buildings in my neighborhood.




It
has a big supermarket and a River Park.




3) 동네의 모습, 분위기




My
neighborhood is very clean and nice.




It is
a good place to live.




4) 이웃의 모습, 분위기




I
think my neighbors are friendly and nice.




They
are married and have two young children.




5) 동네에서 최근 겪었던 경험




I
recently had an interesting experience in my neighborhood.




A
famous actor came to the here and took a picture with him.




6) 그것을 경험했던 시기




That
was about two years ago. I was very happy.








2. 사는곳







1) 집의 형태




I
live in a studio apartment near the River Park.




2) 집의 모습, 분위기




My
house is very clean and modern.




My
home has white walls and wooden floors.




3) 집에 있는 방, 공간




There
are three bedrooms, a kitchen, and a living room.




The
living room has a balcony with a great view of the mountains.




4) 방에 있는 가구, 가전제품




I
have a bed, a bookshelf, and a closet
im my room.




There
is also a desk and a computer where I study.




5) 최근 집에준 변화




I
recently redecorated my living room.




I
replaced the old wallpaper.




6) 변화된 후 모습, 분위기




The
new wallpaper has a bright and modern design.




It
made the room brighter.




I am
very happy with my living rooms now.








1. 자기소개 <나 홀로 거주>







Hello
Eva, My name is
Kigeun, and
I am Thirty-Four years old.




I am
currently single.




I
live alone in a studio apartment.




My
home is close to the River Park.




In my
free time, I like to jogging in the park.




This
is my favorite pastime.




Because
it is good for my health.




These
days, my goal is to improve my life.




Last month I went to a concert (by my favorite group) by가 아닌 of를 ㅊㅊ

The concert was at a lage auditorium in Sejong. 스펠링 오류 large로 수정 ㅊㅊ

The auditorium was not only big, but also very modern. 이건 도저히 말이ㅜㅜ 무슨 말을 하고 싶으신건가용ㅜㅜ?


Action movie are very fantastic.

I like many actor, But I like Natale Portman the best. 수의 일치 해주세요!




A famous actor came to the here and took a picture with him. to the here이 무엇일까용





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