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Jin | 2019.05.10 | 조회 706

I live in an apartment in new town area which has been recently built.

It's on the 11th floors of a 20 story apartment building. So i can take a view of the whole city through the window.

The atmosphere of my house is modern and simple, also all funiture is well-organized.

My home has a living room and three bed rooms which have each balcony and large window.

So it is very useful to ventilate and take a fresh air. Moreover all rooms are decorated with white wall and wooden floors.

On the opposite of the living room, There are a kitchen and a built in utility room.

Also both side of the living room, I can use a bathroom.

Lastly, I have an air cleaner and an air conditioner in the living room and i have a brand-new laptop computer in my room.

 

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