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김씨부인 | 2020.02.04 | 조회 587


Q. What sort of gear do you bring along
when you go camping? Do you prefer to take large items like tables and chairs,
or just smaller things like sleeping bags? Please describe the items you bring
in detail, and explain what you use them for.



   
I love go camping, so I know what I should take.



   
The most important items I
bring are my sleeping bag and tent.



   
Both are lightweight, so I can
fasten them to the top of my backpack.



   
I also take a 블루투스 스피커 with me.



   
I enjoy listening to music while
having a barbeque.



   
The music gives new atmosphere
to the camping site.



   
I think it is best not to take
along too much gear when I go to camping.



   
This is mainly because it can
be bothersome if I pack too much.



   
In fact, one thing I don’t like
about camping with my best friend is that he brings too much stuff.



   
Every time I go camping with her,
we have to carry all his gear and then spend hours setting it up.



   
I prefer to keep things simple.

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