My name is 내이름. I turned 26 years old
last February.
I live in a apartment in Seoul with my family
From last year. I'm looking for a job in the field of
engineering or research and developement.
The thing about engineering that attracts me is that
the tacts which my country have powerful
industry in the field of mobile phone.
when I want to relax myself, I go to park with
my doggie. Walking with my dog always
let me kick back and enjoy a moment of peace.
As for my personality, I tend to be calm. I prefer
thinking alone rather than being with other people.
I'd like to be an engineer who make the most fancy
mobile phone in the world. Now I'm hard working
for that day.
틀린부분이나 부자연스러운 부분 있나요?
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