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ㅁㅁ | 2015.10.05 | 조회 2553

파트1-1 - 무난

파트1-2 - 한번실수해서 sorry 하고 다시 읽음.

------------------------------------------> 원래 발음이 별로 안좋아요. 별로인 발음이라고 생각하시면되요

파트2

this is a picture taken outside. there are several people in this picture.

on the right side of the picture, there is a men. he is standing up.

he is wearing a hat and holding some water (남자가 물병을 하늘로 높이들고 걸어가는모습인데 stand, hold 부적절한거같네요ㅜ)

in the middle of the picture, one of them is a women. she is wearing a red clothe and she is holding a plactic bag.

on the left side of the picture, there is a man. he is carrying a backpack.

in the background of the picture, some of them are boarding a bus.

maybe, they are going to somewhere

파트3-1 : 주변에 은행있니? 얼마나멀리있니? 얼마나자주가니?

in my city, there is a big bank. it takes 20 minutes. ---------->얼마나 자주가는지 답 안했고

how far인데 거리 안말하고 시간만말했어요ㅜ

파트3-2 : 온라인뱅킹 좋아하니? 왜?

(문제에코잉.) nowadays, internet is convenient. it is easy to access

파트3-3 : 새로운 은행이 생겼을때 가고싶니? 왜?

(문제에코잉. 꽤길음) ..... i have....... (버벅) i have .. a... only one account. so i need more accounts.

there are many banks. ---> 망한건가요

파트4-1 : 마스터 디그리 알려줘 --> 년도 전치사를 in 써야되는디 from이라구 씀..

파트4-2 : 스페니쉬 가능여부 --> 매우 버벅대면서 말함.. he is fluent spanish. he can speack spanish. 그리고, 부가설명하다 짤림

파트4-3 : 워크익스퓨리언스 2개 있는거 알려줘야되는문제 ----> 문제잘못들어서 벙쪄있다가 말하는데, 매우 버벅댔고

하나는 since쓰고, has been working써야되는데 걍 다 worked 함..

년도도 제대로 전달 못하고 더듬다가 짤림.. 망 인것같네요.

파트5 : 나는 뮤즈엄 주인이고 너는 뮤지엄 매니저라서 물어보는거야~ lecture가 계획됬는데 티겟은 매진됬지만 관객 더 늘리고싶어

hello, this is ~~. i heard that you are working at the museum.
however, there is a problem. because many people will attend the show.
and, the place is limited. so you would like to get some help with this matter.
first of all, i'm sorry to hear about the situation. however, i'm happy to say that there is a
way to help you out. afterlooking in to the situation, i came up with the follwing suggestions.
first of all, i think it is a good idea to expand the place. that should be effective.
more over, why don't you make more place? that should be helpful. many people will attend show. those are my suggestions. if you need more help, feel free to call me back any time. bye.

-------> 1. 화자는 뮤즈엄 주인?이고, 나는 매니저? 였는데 you are working at the museum 이라고함.ㅜ

이상하죠. 뮤즈엄 주인이 매니저인 나한테 조언달라한건데 넌 뮤즈엄에서 일하는구나~ 라고 한거니까 ㅜㅜ
2. lecture 를 계속 show라고 함.. ㅜㅜ

3. 문제점언급에서 the place is limited 라고 했는데, 문제에서 공간부족에 대한 언급은 없었습니다. 단지 제 추측일뿐; 이것도좀;ㅜ

파트6 - job satisfaction에 어떤게 가장 중요한지? friendly coworker 선택.

답변 : ( 문제 에코잉. 카우워커라고 쭉~읽음)

most of all, in the business, coworker is most important

for example, when i was in a college, i started online shopping mall, however i had no experience

and i didn't know everything. so i had to learn one by one. and, i worked with a partner who is friend.

thanks to my partner, i was able to learn many things. he taught me many skills such as marketing, promotion, and so on.

finally, the business was successful. that is why i think ( 문제 에코잉. 카우워커라고 쭉~읽음 )

-------> 오프토픽일까요 ? 맨앞, 맨끝에는 문제 에코잉으로 coworker 언급했지만 본론에는 partner 라고만 했거든요..

친근한 동료가 만족도를 준다는 거를, 파트너가 친구였고 파트너덕분에 많이 배우고 나의 사업 성공햇다 뭐 이런 스토리..

6레벨 받을수있을까요?ㅜㅜ 잔실수가 너무 많은거같네요..


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