is the paragraph complete?
are there enough examples and do they make the meaning of
jealousy clear? exlain
an anthropological look for causes has led some experts to conclude that jealousy is biological that it is instinctive behavior, in other words.
another characteristic of the jealous person is a greater than normal discrepancy between how that person is and how he or she would like to be.
not every paragraph has a conclusion, especially if it is part of a longer piece of writing. This paragraph has one. What is its function? Would teh paragraph be as strong without it?
(note: In one paragraph, it is difficult to discuss both causes and effects. As a writer, focus on one or the other as the author of paragraph 2 has done.)