숙제하는데... 문법 좀 체크해주세요 밑줄친 부분 중심으로요~
He couldn’t tell anyone what he did, even his wife. It has hung over his head for a long time. Though he could go to police earlier, he had no guts to tell the truth by himself, and there was no one to help him to do it. So he couldn’t share his burden until he was captured by the police.
숙제의 전체적인 내용은요, 남자가 사람을 죽였는데요, 안잡혔어요. 그 후로 40년동안 정말 착하게 살았거든요. 근데 그토록 반성하고 자기 잘못을 아는데 왜 진작에 경찰에 자수하러 못갔는지를 설명하려고 넣은 문장인데... 문법이 맞는지.. 또 아님 괜춘한 코멘트 부탁드릴게요 ㅎ
Although some people said that he was almost an adult, he was an immature, inexperienced boy.
이거는요ㅎ immature 하고 inex- 사이에 코마를 넣어야 하나요 아님 and를 넣어야 적절한가요??ㅎ