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I will talk about my most precious thing, computer.


 


when I first used computer, I was eight


 


through computer I saw Ryang-hyeon ryang-ha’s music video, it's really amazing


 


It's very strange to people who in the computer moved and you can see that picture to convenient.


 


as time goes on, computer is developing at high speed you can do many


things in it.


 


you are able to that get many information, talk with people take advantage of computer.


 


In addition, you can have a good time with interesting game.


 


I enjoy cafe, blog, article though the computer.


 


for a while, I did battle with my brothers, because of computer time.


 


but now, I and brothers using computer to distribute time.


 


computer have many merits and weakness.


 


stupid comment and game addiction are a case in point


 


If you observe good manners in the internet and take use right, computer can very


useful.


 


I think it is too difiicult for me to live without a computer.


 


So, my pavorite thing is computer. thank you.


 


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