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헬프미 | 2009.10.11 | 조회 612
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<첫번째>
Hello from Seoul.
Oh, let me introduce myself.
My name is A-young kim, student, and 22 years old.
In class, I saw your life through ' A streetcar Named Desire' text & movie.
After later, I feel necessity of talk with you. So I was send this letter to you.
Maybe now you're so exhausted by all you'd been through.
So from now on, I'll write a three prescription for you.
The first prescription is 'be play it by ear'.
In worst situation, like Mitch and you separated to each other, your play it by ear can affected to result of situation. Keep your peace and relax. Consider yourself lucky, it could have been worse. Then your nerves down will be good.
And the second is 'be hopeful women'.
As I see, you look very negative about your situation and past.
But nobody is perfect. I think that just your blemish is little bigger than others. Life has many joys and sorrows. Also, life has many chance, too.
So I really hope that you can be conquest your scar and stand up in middle of your life. You should remember that this old saying. "Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors."
At lastly, the third prescription is 'energetic social activity'.
You are very hear the grass grow about your scar & past.
So you need get out of this. So I'll recommended social activity: volunteer-action, going to cook-academy, meeting friends, and so on.
Through these social activity, you can be lick own's wounds.
If you have a iron will that subjugation scar. Change is the key to success.
My advice is that is all.
If you keep my prescription, you'll be all right and your star will rise next year.
I'll keep my fingers crossed.


How's everything going?
I hope that you will be not fine. Do you know reason?
Because, I was disappointed you. I remember your first impression.
When I saw you in text & movie, you look like very sincere person.
But, as time goes, you learned about Blanche's past, and you are reveal your true character. Of course, her past make me crazy, too.
Because you like her, your anger is bigger than me.
I understand your heart.
But, Mitch. In the end, your rude behavior is all your fault!
Not to put too fine a point on it, in that situation, you look like just because want to intimacies with Blanches.


 


<두번째>


How's everything going?


I hope that you will be not fine. Do you know reason?


Because, I was disappointed you. I remember your first impression.


When I saw you in text & movie, you look like very sincere person.


But, as time goes, you learned about Blanche's past, and you are reveal your true character. Of course, her past make me crazy, too.


Because you like her, your anger is bigger than me.


I understand your heart.


But, Mitch. In the end, your rude behavior is all your fault!


Not to put too fine a point on it, in that situation, you look like just because want to intimacies with Blanches. How change attitude at a breath?
When she spoke her past to you, I hope that you cover up for her. But you are..
If you really love her, please forgive her.
She's lie is not a black lie, just a white lie for you.
Real love should weather through, and in all weathers, always love each other.
I think that you can do real love.
Do you know Eros?
Today, I will be Eros, who was the god of love.
Eros had a golden arrow. It had a power of making a victim fall in love with someone he first saw.
So, I shot the golden arrow at you.
Mitch, I want to you and Blanche meet again, and be happy couples.
So, please give her chance one more time.
I think that you are not such a coward but you can do this.
I'll always cheering you in my soul of souls.  


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