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i think 시 일찍 학교에서 배우는게 좋다~
그이유를 말할게.
first of all, these day. many students live in a competitive society. so they have a lot of stess these day. if they learn 시~ at their school, they can broaden their perspective and knowledge. beacuse they can share about their idea and brainstorming skill.
also, it is more freedom.
so it is good for their mental and phchecal health. so they can learn more easily and productively. as a result, they can get good grade at scool.
for these reasons ,I think this way.
i think 시 일찍 학교에서 배우는게 좋다~
그이유를 말할게.
first of all, these day. many students live in a competitive society. so they have a lot of stess these day. if they learn 시~ at their school, they can broaden their perspective and knowledge. beacuse they can share about their idea and brainstorming skill.
also, it is more freedom.
so it is good for their mental and phchecal health. so they can learn more easily and productively. as a result, they can get good grade at scool.
for these reasons ,I think this way.





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