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these days they donT have a time to reduce their stress
to be specific they want to have long break time such as visiting different countries
it will be lead to student growth
second these days they are immature and out of control
to be specific they dont know the importance of break
they donT know what is right and what is wrong
it will be neccesary for children
so i think ~~~
q3에서 우산 들고있다를 입고있다라고 하고
다른 부분은 다 잘 말했는데
al 가능할까요..
11번이 먼가 주제에 어긋난 답변을 한 것 같습니다
these days they donT have a time to reduce their stress
to be specific they want to have long break time such as visiting different countries
it will be lead to student growth
second these days they are immature and out of control
to be specific they dont know the importance of break
they donT know what is right and what is wrong
it will be neccesary for children
so i think ~~~
q3에서 우산 들고있다를 입고있다라고 하고
다른 부분은 다 잘 말했는데
al 가능할까요..
11번이 먼가 주제에 어긋난 답변을 한 것 같습니다





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