문제 1 : 디 라고 발음 해야하는데 더 라고 함

문제 2: 한 문장 쉼표인줄 알고 마지막 음 올렸는데 알고보니 마침표였음

(발음은 전반적으로 괜찮은편이었습니다.)

문제3. 문제4 (순서가 기억이 안나요ㅜ)

 To me ,this picture was captured at a meeting room.

What i notice first is two people sitting at a table.

They are gazing at a woman.

The woman is wearing a black coat.

All in all, it seems like the people are having a meeting.

Personally, the photo was captured on a road.

The first thing i can see two people walking on a road(street이라 했는지 기억이 안나요)

on the left, a man?(a woman) in red holding a basket(a shopping bag이라 하려했는데 헷갈림)

next to her(him), a woman is holding a basket(얘는 바구니 들고 있어서 맞음)

in the background. i can see a car parked along the street.

파트3 

수영장 갈 계획있냐? 왜?

갈 계획있다. because its so exciting.

수영장 24시간 운영해야하나?

24시간 운영해야한다고 생각한다. beacause i can go to a swimming pools whenever i want

수영장 고려요소 (수질, 수영장 풀 크기, 주변 앉을 자리 )

 주변 앉을 자리 고르고 

i usually go to a swimming pools with my friends.

it can suit many peoples taste. ( 보기 해석 잘못해서 다른 답변했어요.)

파트4 는 다 맞게 한 것 같아요.

파트5 는 제 기준에서 잘한 것 같아요

정부가 어디다 투자하는게 좋은 것 같냐.(공원, 대중 교통, 공공 교육?)

For me , public transportation is most important factor.

Let me explain why i think so.

Most of all, its very helpful.

From my experience, last year, our government added bus stops and buses.

Thanks to them, i was able to save money and time.

Also it reduced traffic jams and overcrowding on buses.

in addition. it helped many people find parking space easily 

and it reduced environmental pollution.

Therefore, thats why i think so.

전체적으로 실수들이 좀 있었지만 그래도 발음, 억양, 강세는 전체적으로 유지했습니다.