딱히 전체적으로 절거나 침묵이나 단어실수한거 없었어 평가해주라..
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5번.베이커리 집 마지막으로 언제갔어? 누구랑 갔어? (나는 2주전에 마지막으로 방문하고 나의 친구랑 갔었어 그리고 나는 그리고 쿠키를먹었어 친구와 함께 그것은 잊을수 없는 기억이었어)
6번. 똑같은 상품 계속샀어? ? 왜?(나는똑같은 상품 사지않아. 왜냐하면 나는 다양한 음식들을 먹는걸 좋아해 such as cookies, some beverages and chips)
빵 살때 뭐가 중요해?선택지에 whether staff is friednly있길래 골라서 (if 빵집이 has good friendly staff, i can feel more satisfied as well as i can visit this bakery more. Actually in my case, i have ever visited a new bakery shop nearby mu house. I thought the owner of this bakery was very kind) 답어때?
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“충분한 연습이 함께라면 훌룡한 public speaker가 될수있어? ” 문장에서
Agree하고~
I think there is nothing unless i make an effort.
Actually in my case, when i was a high school student, i had a friend who dreamed to be a public speaker such as news speaker. I thought even though he didn’t have any talents, he has always made an effort everyday at home. As a result, my friend was able to be a successful news speaker in 2 years ago. And i respected my friend. On top of that, by seeing his effort to be a news speaker, young children who are dreaming to be news speaker in the future can learn the importance of self -confidence and consistency.어때? 딱히 절거나 침묵도 없고 자신있게 끝까지 채워서 말했어
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