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I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment. outdoors.

Let me explain why I think this way.

Most of all, it’s because there are many exercise equipment machine in a gym.

It is useful.

For In my experience, there were a lot of exercise equipment when I went to the gym,

I felt that it was useful because I could do various exercises. 

there is many machine.

So, it’s very useful.

And I can also it is more focus only on exercising.

For this reason, I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

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