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RE:오픽 자기소개 첨삭 답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2025.01.06 | 조회 91

Hi, I’m Chaewon. I turned 26 years old just
this year. I live in an apartment in Incheon with my parents and my cat.
I’ve lived We have been living with my the cat for 4 years.



I love animals, so I wanted to learn veterinary
science. But my major is different. I’ve been studying computer science so far.
I will graduate from university next month and start my master’s program in March. To be honest, A new beginnings always makes me nervous, but I’m gonna
make effort to study what I’m interested in. I believe that hard work leads me to great
results.



Someday I hope to work for an IT company.
The competition is fierce in today’s job market, so I study to make my dream a
reality. And that’s pretty much all I have to say about myself.


- 자신의 경험, 성격에 대한 이야기가 추가적으로 들어간다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.

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