해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken at an office.
This picture seems to be take at an office.
There are four people in this picture.
The first thing that catches my eye is a man wearing in a suit the man is holding some papers.
On the left side of the picture, the lady there is a woman holding a cup. on the right
In the background, I can see some meeting room.
And Some two people are passing by.
-> 그림에 대해 구체적으로 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 조금 더 자연스러운 문장으로 수정이 필요했습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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