해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken at an office.
What I noticed first is that there are two person in front of this picture.
The man with the beard has a bear and is wearing a business suit.
Next to him, also there is a the woman is wearing a business suit too.
Behind of them, i can see some two people.
And On the left side of the picture, I can see a desk, chair and many conference rooms with a desk and a chair. doors. with glass windows.
-> 사소한 실수가 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 완벽한 문장을 구사하셔야 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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