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김*진 | 2025.01.17 | 조회 57

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This question is little bit difficult for me.

But in my mind I think exercise in a gym with equipment is better then outdoors.

First, we can exercise in a gym anytime anywhere regardless weather.

If the windy or rainy or snowy in outside,

we can just go to the gym and can do exercise 

Specifically, in a gym we can use lots of equipment.

And there is nothing to limit to do exercise.

So, it is more freely than outdoors.



※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.

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