My name is In Hye Jeong. I turned 15 years old just last month. I am a middle school student. I live in an apartment in Sejong. My favorite subject is math. It’s because it’s the answer is clear in math. clearly. So math is fun. I really like to teach someone. so I want to be a teacher. My hobby these days is recording my life. Recording my life can help me think again. can think again so it’s good for my future.
-> 사소한 실수가 있어 수정이 필요했습니다. 자신의 경험, 사는 곳, 성격 등에 대해 조금 더 구체적으로 설명해 주셔야 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
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