My name is Seohee Yeon. I turned 15 years old just last month. I live an apartment with my family in Sejong. My hobbies are listening to music and dancing. Therefore, I am very interested in the entertainment industy thesedays. Also I loved to dance since I was young, because dancing makes me happy. I feel happy when I dance. Someday, I hope to be a choreographer or an idol.
-> 사소한 실수가 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 추가적으로 자신의 성격, 경험 등에 대한 조금 더 작성해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 겁니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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