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첨삭지기 | 2025.01.17 | 조회 70

Hi, nice to meet you eva. So how are you? Eva



I’m pretty good, but honestly I am little bit
nervous right now. But I will try to do my best to answer your questions.



My name is hyojin han, and my English name
is jinny, so you can just call me jinny.



I turned 31 years old this year. And I live
in a house in Incheon with my husband and my lovely daughter.



 



I received my bachelor’s degree in biotechnology
a few years ago, so I work at a pharmaceutical company. I spend most of my time
at work monitoring pharmaceutical manufacturing processes.



 



Oh! Let me tell you about what I usually do.



I have several hobbies, but my most recent
addiction is to play with my daughter. My daughter and I spend a lot of time doing
outdoor activites because of my outgoing personality.



 



Eventually, I’d like to achieve a happy
family. So I will do my best in every moment.

Thank you for listening.


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