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I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment. 

The exercise in I think Exercising outdoors is not very safe.

because We cannot use equipment. insafety by using the no equipment.

It only using the body except the equipment.

And So, I didn’t excited except no equipment.

we have to do bare body exercises without equipment.

So, I didn’t work out where there was no equipment.

I think it’s better to exercise safely with the help of trainers in a gym with equipment.

So, I want I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

I think so.

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