해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think exercising in a gym with equipment is the better.
Let me explain why I think this way.
Most of all it is good to lose my weight.
About two years ago I have to lose my weight
during that period I went to the gym and use a lot of equipment to do exercise.
As a result i can lose my weight.
Therefore I think exercising in a gym with equipment is better.
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