해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise outdoors rather than to exercise in a gym with equipment
for several reasons.
first, while exercising outdoors we can feel our environment such as we can fresh air and we can see our outdoor.
secondly we also can exercise with someone.
therefore I think it is better idea to exercise outdoor.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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