해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is a picture taken at an office.
There are four people in this picture.
In the picture, all of them are wearing formal clothes.
In the middle of the picture, there is a man holding a documents.
Next to him, a woman is holding a cup.
They are talking to each other.
In front of him them, there is a copy machine.
Behind them, there are two other people standing.
Next to him, there is a woman holding a cup.
-> 어색한 부분이 많아 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다.
조금 더 완벽한, 구체적인 묘사가 필요할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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