Hello. My name is Sumin and I am 24 years old. I am currently looking for a job. My major was Embedded Syestem. I would like to find a position as a firmware engineer in a large company. Right Now I live with my mom in Incheon. I think I am a hard-working person. Therefore, I try to push myself to the limits. when I have free time, I like to assemble gundam. 

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