해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I often go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
This is because I can relieve my stress by eating delicious food.
And In addition, I can experience new foods and become very healthy through various nutritional intake.
get a good experience.
And I can stay very healthy.
Also, Going to a good restaurant is something I love.
It’s very favorite thing to do.
-> 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 작성해 주셨지만, 조금 더 자연스러운 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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