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I don’t often go often to restaurants outside this neighborhood.
I only go to restaurants outside once a month.
That’s because First, I don’t have enough money
And second The economy is so bad these days.
So, the price went up and everything is became expensive.
and I don’t want to can’t spend a lot of too much money on food.
and I’m still a student so, I don’t have a lot of money.
So, I want to save my money
That’s because I not don’t often go to often restaurants outside this neighborhood.
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※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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