해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This photo was taken outdoors.
What The first thing I can see first in this picture there is a man and a woman crouching is doing a gardening on the ground and gardening.
The man on the left side of the picture has a white hair and is wearing a green t-shirt with white hair, and wearing a green gloves and putting planting the flowers in a on the pot.
Beside of the man Next to him, the woman is wearing a blue T-shirt and wearing a hat.
-> 주어진 그림에 대해 구체적으로 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 어색한 부분이 발견되어 조금 더 자연스럽게 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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