해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in an office.
There are two four people in this picture.
All of them are wearing business suits.
And they Two people are standing in front of a copy machine.
Especially, a man with a beard is holding some papers.
And Next to him, a woman is looking at the papers.
All of them are wearing business suits.
-> 조금 더 자연스러운 묘사로 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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