해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think exercise in a gym is better than outdoors.
Because if I exercise at the gym, I can exercise anytime whenever it rainy and snow.
So, and if I exercise with a equipment I can do more effectively and safely.
That’s why I prefer gym than outdoors.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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