해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
The picture was taken outdoors.
Many people are walking around the campus on the street.
A man in the middle is riding a bicycle, and he is wearing a blue T-shirt.
Another man is sitting on a bench a lot here and he is wearing a checkered shirt.
In the background, I can see a building painted colorerfull in colorful colors.
Well, everything looks peaceful, and the weather looks beautiful.
-> 그림에 대한 묘사를 구체적으로 잘 해주셨지만, 사소한 실수가 많아 수정이 필요했습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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