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RE:파트2 2문제 첨삭답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2025.03.31 | 조회 159
예제문제 1)
this is a picture taken outdoors.
in the middle of a the picture, there are two people.
A woman wearing a hat is standing and looking at the a man. while standing.
 in front of her, a man is wearing in a uniform and is looking into the a car.
On the left side of the picture, there is a car that has been in an having accident.
I think they are having a problem.

문제2)
this is a picture taken at the a meeting room.
on the right side of the picture, a woman is standing is and writing down something on a whiteboard while looking at another person.
on the left side of the picture, some people of them are sitting at the on chairs. 
A man men wearing a checkered shirts is looking at the screen while typing on a laptop.

문제3)
this is a picture taken at the a library . 
on the right side of the picture, a man wearing a checkered shirt and  is wearing a headset he is typing on a laptop while looking at the screen . 
on the table, there are a lot of books.
in the background of the picture, many books are arranged on the bookshelves

문제4)
this is a picture taken Outdoors.
on the right side of the picture, there is a restaurant there are with many people sitting on chairs.at the chair.
 a waitress is serving  some food.
on the left side of the picture, I can see some yachts and buildings.
it seems like it is very peaceful.

처음 언급되는 명사 앞에는 The를 사용하는 것보다 A를 사용하는 게 자연스럽습니다. 또한 wearing을 사용할 때는 and를 써서 한 문장으로 묶어주는 것이 자연스럽습니다. 그림에 대한 묘사가 주어진 시간 안에 조금 더 구체적으로 이루어진다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 마지막으로 자신의 생각보다 그림에 나타나는 것을 묘사해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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