해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
You can check I can see four people in this picture.
All of them are wearing black formal clothes.
Three people are wearing pants.
And one person is wearing a long skirt.
Some Two of them are looking for at some papers in front of the a copy machine.
Some of them jsut waiting.
Behind of them, they are all wearing black uniform.
Two other people are standing in the background of the picture.
Three people wearing pants.
One people wearing long skirt.
And also they are wearing Y-shirt.
-> 그림에 대한 묘사가 다소 부족하며, 문법적 오류가 많이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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