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I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

There are some several advantages.

First, We can work out in a clean environment with experienced trainers. 

have clean and experienced in a gym.

Second, we can use various equipment, which makes exercise more effective. 

using an equipment. 

Therefore, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

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