해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think this picture was taken in a garden.
There are two people in the picture.
One is old man and one is old woman.
An elderly man and an elderly woman are planting flowers in a vase.
And they are planting a flower in the bucket.
And the there is a black shovel is next to the old man.
and a green hoe is next to the old woman.
And behind them there is a big mountain.
-> 어색한 부분이 많아 자연스럽게 수정이 필요했습니다. 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 필요할 것 같습니다, 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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