해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think exercising outdoors is better than exercising in a gym with equipment.
Because if you exercise outdoors, you can get a sunrise that is good for our health.
And you can also meet friends if you exercise outdoors.
And also you can walk and jog around the park.
So, you can get a refresh.
And if you exercise outdoors , you can be free than exercise indoors.
So, I think exercising outdoors is better than exercising in a gym with equipment.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.





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